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I want to tell you I love you.
That my heart longs your being.
My soul wishes to see yours.
My body longs to hold you close.

I want to tell you I think I love you.
When you laugh, I feel your glee.
When you cry, I feel your despair.
When you're angry, I feel your rage.

I want to tell you I need you.
I cannot breathe without you.
I cannot see without you.
I cannot think without you.

I want to tell you I think of you.
Whenever we aren't talking.
At school, at home.
You're the theme of my mind.

I want to tell you that You’re my angel
You’re the only sunshine in my life
And I wonder if you know just how I feel..

I have been waiting,
All of my life
For you to come along,
And make everything alright

I want to tell you why I wrote this.
I wrote this because I haven't told you any of this.
All that I've wanted to tell you, that I've wanted to say.
All that I've been nervous to confess.

So, I tell you now.
How my words explain a fragment of my love.
A small chip of my affection.
I hope you hear my confession..

So take me by the hand,
Please don't leave me here alone
©2009-2010 ~cooperpa
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:iconkoolchristiangal1994:
that is possibly one of the most beautiful things i have ever read. I know exactly where you're coming from- I'm in the same boat, and it isnt the best place to be. Great job getting the point across. and whoever it is ought to consider themselves' lucky...

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"Give me one pure and holy passion,
Give me one magnifiscent obsession,
Give me one glorious ambition for my life,
To know and follow hard after You."


"In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world." ~John 16:33b
:iconcougirl94:
I agree with Britt, that's awesome, and really sweet :aww:

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Proverbs 31:30
"Charm is deceptive, and beauty is fleeting, but a woman who fears the Lord is to be praised."
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*~ "No, love is not a fight, but it's something worth fighting for..." ~*
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Icon made by =KaleyAngela :)
:iconcooperpa:
thanks cougirl94 & koolchristiangal1994 comments much appreciated, even after saying it to her she didnt realise it was written about her

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Paul Cooper

Help to find a cure for spinal cord injuries,
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:iconmasterofmyown:
My first comment,I'm new but I think I'm surfing here more than a hour a day :P.

I read this two months ago,I was thinking that was good poem,so I had in my favorite....

Today,reviewing my favorite deviation I fall on this one and when I read this for the second time,I knew it was a masterpiece.

Since the previous episode I lived,A fire is burning in my heart, Anger,Joy and finally sadness.Hard to put words on so much contrasted emotion,But you found the right ones.

Ps:I'm french if there anything you don't understand..my fault!Really good job!

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